Some people believe that nowadays we have too much choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #choice

İt is generally thought that

people

can seek the benefit from myriad

choices

in today's complex society. Personally, I agree with

this

point of view for several reasons. There is no doubt true that there are countless

choices

we face in a technologically developed and globalized world. Looking at the bright side, having numerous

choices

could probably cause

people

to choose whatever they want. It is obvious that there are wide ranges of products, services, as well as opportunities that we can make a decision which

one

is suitable for us.

For example

, when I go to the market or retail objects where

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me a lot of chances to make a

choice

, I always deliberate the goods a lot to choose

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one

Therefore

, in

this

case

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people

may have the opportunity to buy anything which can be affordable for their pocket. In a rapidly changing world, human beings have progressively developed every field. It would appear that to make a

choice

people

have to have different kinds of option.

However

, I agree that we have more chances than the past to choose something, according to some researchers, the more

choice

people

have, the less happy they will be. It is because

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we do not know which commodity is decent for us among abundant products, and to choose the best

one

we need to search all of them. At the

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we choose

one

of them

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and get out of there. But choosing another option may make us feel down,

becuase

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because

we think that maybe we would pick other product, not

this

one

. As

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can be seen, owning lots of

choice

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choices

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is not beneficial all the time. To sum up, it is understandable that there are shortage options in some areas,

however

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I am inclined to believe that

people

have already achieved to possess lots of

choices

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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