In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does the development have more advantages or more disadvantages?
In recent years, the introduction of digitalization in the banking industry has
ease
the life of the consumers. Despite Change the verb form
eased
of
certain cons, Remove the preposition
apply
this
transformation has brought comfort as well as security into the area of finance
management and, Replace the word
financial
thus
, public from various nations are positively adapting this
development. In this
essay, we will discuss how phone banking has created more merits than demerits for the
users.
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To begin
with, banking applications can facilitate instant payment for any kind of transaction and can therefore
, negate the stress of carrying cash. Add the comma(s)
,therefore
In addition
, these banking applications can provide numerous promotional offers on every payment. For example
, at Paytm app
a person can receive a moneyback of 10% on every usage. Add a comma
,app
Furthermore
, phone banking may also
provide ease in pursuing other bank related activities such
as immediate access to bank
statement, easy money Add an article
the bank
a bank
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and an instant transfer of fund.
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deposit
deposited
On the other hand
, with the rising rate of cyber crime
, there could be certainly threats associated with the usage of Correct your spelling
cybercrime
apps-based
bank like unauthorised transactions. Add an article
the apps-based
an apps-based
However
, the possibility of such
problems can be minimised by creating a strong personalised I'd and password and strictly avoid sharing the one time password with unknown
and suspicious person.
To conclude, Add an article
an unknown
although
there are some internet related
frauds that may happen with the usage of mobile phone banking, these drawbacks can be handled by strengthening the Add a hyphen
internet-related
secuirty
code. Correct your spelling
security
Therefore
, the comfort and experience obtained through payment done via cellphone apps outweigh the disadvantages.Submitted by abhi on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
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- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
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