Globalization has brought about more positive economic impacts than negative ones. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

While some individuals think that globalization improves the economical situations of the

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compared to the negativities it promotes. I completely agree with

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statement. Globalizing

develops

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the economy by creating trade opportunities. As the

world

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is now become

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a global village, it initiates many ways of trading by providing

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easy access to the countries. Unlike past, at present, people travel abroad easily, acquaint with vibrant customs, and find out

demands

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the demands

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of products to import overseas.

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, tax and

tarrif

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tariff

of importing goods are

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reduced considering the inter-relationship between the

nations

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.

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, the states

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connected together and blooming the businesses, which is gradually rising

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financial stabilities.

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, currently,

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the Maldives

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, one of

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nations

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has earned

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of their GDP through tourism;

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become possible because of the frequent entrance of the foreign

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to their spots.

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, many

nations

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are losing their heritage because of

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trend. Frequent travelling overseas, availability of satellite channels, and using

internet

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the internet

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in some cases are changing peoples' sense to adopt other's culture

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of following their self norms.

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, with the progress of time, all the states are getting alike and reducing diversity. If

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trend is continuing with

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speed, very soon the

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world

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will

lost

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its

veriety

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variety

and become mundane. Despite these, following good habits regardless of self traditions is appreciable because it will help the

nations

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to survive conveniently in the competitive

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. In conclusion, people have contrasting views, whether being a global village is financially

benificial

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beneficial

or drives negativities in the earth. In my opinion, globalization is a thread for the sustainability of

own

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culture, its positive impacts outweigh the cons.