Globalization has brought about more positive economic impacts than negative ones. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

While some individuals think that globalization improves the economical situations of the
world
compared to the negativities it promotes. I completely agree with
this
statement. Globalizing
develops
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the economy by creating trade opportunities. As the
world
is now become
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a global village, it initiates many ways of trading by providing
the
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easy access to the countries. Unlike past, at present, people travel abroad easily, acquaint with vibrant customs, and find out
demands
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of products to import overseas.
Moreover
, tax and
tarrif
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tariff
of importing goods are
also
reduced considering the inter-relationship between the
nations
.
Thus
, the states
becomes
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connected together and blooming the businesses, which is gradually rising
the
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financial stabilities.
For example
, currently,
Maldives
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, one of
coastal
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nations
has earned
maximum
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a maximum
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of their GDP through tourism;
this
become possible because of the frequent entrance of the foreign
travelers
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to their spots.
Nevertheless
, many
nations
are losing their heritage because of
this
trend. Frequent travelling overseas, availability of satellite channels, and using
internet
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the internet
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in some cases are changing peoples' sense to adopt other's culture
instead
of following their self norms.
Therefore
, with the progress of time, all the states are getting alike and reducing diversity. If
this
trend is continuing with
such
speed, very soon the
the
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world
will
lost
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its
veriety
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variety
and become mundane. Despite these, following good habits regardless of self traditions is appreciable because it will help the
nations
to survive conveniently in the competitive
world
. In conclusion, people have contrasting views, whether being a global village is financially
benificial
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beneficial
or drives negativities in the earth. In my opinion, globalization is a thread for the sustainability of
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culture, its positive impacts outweigh the cons.
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