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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

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Nowadays, there are numerous amount of advances made in agriculture
such
 as expansion in technology, improvement in
quality
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 of fertilizers, pesticides and seeds but , in spite, of so many advantages many
people
 are facing hunger issues. The following essays will inform us about the reason behind these problems and what can be done to overcome them. In today’s world, almost all developed countries have made a huge advancement in the field of agriculture. Scientists have invented so many ways to keep the soil fertile ,
however
,
people
 around the world go hungry and one of the main reason is climate. To illustrate, in
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a country
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 like Japan where there are too many facilities for farmers but
this
 country is frequently hit by a tsunami due to which the crops get destroyed and
people
 die of hunger.
Moreover
, corruption is
also
 one of the most important reason because ,due to
this
 , farmers are not getting
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 quality of agricultural equipment and they have to
spent
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 their own money in order to do a good amount of farming.
On the other hand
, there are numerous amount of ways to improve
this
 situation.
Firstly
, countries which are facing issues related to climate should devise a way to get away from
this
 problem.
For example
, places where floods are frequent, they should do plantations
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 hilly areas.
Secondly
,
people
 who are not getting
good
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 quality of equipment
,
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 should complain to
high
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 level of ministry and they should broadcast
this
 issue with the help of news channels. To conclude ,
although
 there is
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 enormous expansion in the field of agriculture ,
people
 should
also
 look towards the improvement in solving issues related to hunger.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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