Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this. Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain • Why you are writing to them • Why you think the insurance should not be increased • What you want them to do

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Dear Sir, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the sudden increment in my car

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EMI payment per month. My name is Gaurav Jain, who purchased car

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from your company recently. Yesterday only I received an email stating that from the

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month onwards the

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EMI will get increased by 590 reps, which is unfair to the customers and against the policy. As I already signed some papers before buying car

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that until 3 years my monthly instalments will remain the same since I have opted for a fixed rate scheme rather than a flexible one.

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, I believe there should not be any rise in my monthly payment before 3 years. I would request you to please cross check the rules of the scheme because I will not be able to pay any additional charges and unfortunately I will be forced to terminate my 3 years bond with your firm. It would be highly appreciable if you can be fully transparent at the purchase time so that other customers will not face any

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issues. I will be waiting for your prompt reply. Yours faithfully, Gaurav Jain

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

193 words

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