Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays one of the major concerns of
lives
in the earth is the pollution of its land and marine area. It is the fact that
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over
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use
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the use
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of
plastic
is the prime reason behind
this
. Some
people
think that
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they should be banned, whereas , others have an opposite opinion.I will discuss both the arguments in
this
essay and state my own view in the conclusion. On the one hand ,
plastic
is mandatory in every nook and corner, especially in the form of shopping bags and
people
have nil care about its disposal.
For instance
, most of the times they throw the
plastic
waste in the road as well in the river or sea.
Plastic
is a
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thing.
As a result
of
this
,
lives
in the universe face
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threat in the form of pollution . Eventually,
human
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being might result in respiratory problems and
majority
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the majority
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of the endangered marine
lives
will face extinction.
Hence
, for the healthy better future of
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living beings , it is better to prohibit the use of
plastic
.
On the other hand
, some
people
think that
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plastic
is an
unavaidable
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unavoidable
aminity
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amenity
in the present world.it is not
necessory
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necessary
to stop the availability of the
plastic
.
However
, it is
such
a foolish argument and those who support
this
have nil awareness of its consequences.
Therefore
, it is the responsibility of each
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to take
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swift action against the usage o
plastic
.
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educate the community regarding the ill- effects of
such
products. In conclusion , based on the above arguments , I strongly support the group of
people
, who stated to ban the
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plastic
. To support
this
argument with a suggestion that , use of paper bags can be initiated and can be motivated because they are
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products, which will not cause any harm to the
lives
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • detrimental
  • non-biodegradable
  • pollution
  • biodegradable
  • sustainable
  • mitigate
  • ecosystem
  • recycling
  • reusable
  • environmental impact
  • eco-friendly
  • implementation
  • convenient alternatives
  • enforcement
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