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Some people believe that face to face communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some would argue that live communication is more significant than letters and messages.
This
 essay completely agrees with
this
 statement because
people
 may easily express an exact emotion by the tone of their
voices
 and may
also
 impress other
people
 and influence their opinion by their body languages and gestures.
Voices
 allow
people
 to make their speech
emotionaly
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emotionally
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.
In other words
, by changing intonations and speed tempo,
people
 may express their
throughts
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thoughts
 more accurately and make them
meaningfull
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meaningful
.
Thus
, with the utilization of the vibrations and quick or slow tempos of
voices
,
people
 are less likely to be misunderstood during conversations.
For example
, a recent Cambridge University survey found that 52% of
people
 prefer leading serious conversations
face
 to
face
 as they are afraid to be misunderstood letters and online chats. Offline communication is much stronger as
people
 may interact
on
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 other
people
 through
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body language. By using
an
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eye contact, firm
hand shakes
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 and other gestures, individuals may not only make
an
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 good or bad impression on other
people
,
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 but
also
 may sometimes manipulate them. More than half of Americans,
for instance
, confessed that they have ever trusted their friends, colleagues and teammates only because of the way they look at them. In conclusion,
face
 to
face
 communications is much more crucial than online conversations because
voices
 may make
people
's speech more accurate and body languages help them in social interaction.
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