In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Construction around the countryside has always been a debatable topic. While
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
a number of people
opines
Change the verb form
opine
show examples
that
contructing
Correct your spelling
constructing
new housing societies spoils the natural beauty of
such
places and it should be stopped.
However
, many individuals see it as an alternative to
build
Change the verb form
building
show examples
new
apratments
Correct your spelling
apartments
apartment
in the
country side
Correct your spelling
countryside
show examples
due to lack of space available in
cities
.
This
essay will argue both sides and supports the latter view. On one hand, there are many persons who want to spend some time with nature and enjoy its
beautifull
Correct your spelling
beautiful
view.
This
is only possible when we will not do
contruction
Correct your spelling
construction
to build our flats in
such
areas because every building may require some amount deforestation which will not only affect the wild-life of
such
sites but
also
create the
inbalance
Correct your spelling
imbalance
show examples
in the eco-system.
This
will
also
restrict these natural for public and we should not restrict these lands for those only who can afford it.
On the other hand
, several people are
intrested
Correct your spelling
interested
in making their homes in
countryside
Add an article
the countryside
show examples
because of the
unavailabilty
Correct your spelling
unavailability
availability
of land for
contruction
Correct your spelling
construction
in
cities
. Nowadays, a few
cities
are getting
over crowded
Correct your spelling
overcrowded
show examples
than ever because of more job opportunities and
accomodation
Correct your spelling
accommodation
is becoming a widespread issue for city-counsel. So as a solution to
this
problem
contructing
Correct your spelling
constructing
contracting
new housing complexes in the
countryisde
Correct your spelling
countryside
is the only solution left with the government which in turn is creating more jobs for locals and attracting a large
amount
Change the quantifier
number
show examples
of
polulations
Correct your spelling
populations
population
towards these lands. As per my opinion, new construction in the
country side
Correct your spelling
countryside
show examples
is most important
becuase
Correct your spelling
because
it will open the path of development but
also
will release the burden of the over-crowded
cities
. City
counsils
Correct your spelling
councils
should do
a
Remove the article
apply
show examples
proper research and create a master plan before doing any construction so that it will neither affect the natural beauty nor harm the wild-life.
Submitted by mayur.gupta44 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Ecological benefits
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Sustainable development
  • Eco-friendly building materials
  • Green architecture
  • Government policies
  • Urban sprawl
  • Infrastructure
  • Smart planning
  • Agricultural lands
  • Rural areas
  • Population growth
  • Environmental sensitivity
What to do next:
Look at other essays: