You have recently moved, write to your English speaking friend, in your letter

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Dear John, How are you doing? Long time no see! I can’t wait to tell you that I’ve recently moved to a cosy apartment in the city centre. As you may know, I got a promotion to be the Product Manager in the headquarter in the city centre 3 months ago. Since I was living in the outskirts of the city, it’d be approximately 1-hour commuting. So, the best solution was to relocate. My new house is more spacious that’s why it costs me a fortune, but I’m so impressed by its design and location too. It’s near my office by 10 minutes so it’s time-saving. For the design, it consists of 3 bedrooms, one of them has an attached bathroom, a well-equipped kitchen, a living room, a

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one with a garden view and another bathroom.

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, when will you come around? I hope you’d be available

weekend. It’s my birthday party and I’m thinking of having an outdoor gathering in the garden. My dining room will

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be prepared just in case it rains. You’re more than welcome to join as I assure you

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unforgettable night. See you soon. Yours, Peter

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8 paragraphs

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8.00

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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You have recently moved, write to your English speaking friend, in your letter

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