You have recently moved, write to your English speaking friend, in your letter

Dear John, How are you doing? Long time no see! I can’t wait to tell you that I’ve recently moved to a cosy apartment in the city centre. As you may know, I got a promotion to be the Product Manager in the headquarter in the city centre 3 months ago. Since I was living in the outskirts of the city, it’d be approximately 1-hour commuting. So, the best solution was to relocate. My new house is more spacious that’s why it costs me a fortune, but I’m so impressed by its design and location too. It’s near my office by 10 minutes so it’s time-saving. For the design, it consists of 3 bedrooms, one of them has an attached bathroom, a well-equipped kitchen, a living room, a

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one with a garden view and another bathroom.

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, when will you come around? I hope you’d be available

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weekend. It’s my birthday party and I’m thinking of having an outdoor gathering in the garden. My dining room will

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be prepared just in case it rains. You’re more than welcome to join as I assure you

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unforgettable night. See you soon. Yours, Peter

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Feb 9, 2021

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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You have recently moved, write to your English speaking friend, in your letter

People aim to achieve a balance between their work and lives, but few people achieve it. What are the causes of this problem? How to overcome it?

These days it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries for tourism than in the past. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

The current trend in education is to move away from traditional exams and instead have continuous assessment over the school year? what did you think of this trend ?

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, howeve, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.