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The Internet is the best place to find information. Do you agree or disagree?

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Network of networks is best platform to have knowledge. In my opinion,I completely agree with the given statement because world web wide has become a convenient
source
 to access
information
 at present on various subjects.
To begin
 with, modern age is a high tech era in which
internet
 plays a vital role to have
information
 on various subjects. It has made modern life more advanced with
such
 facility : It gives an access of navigation to travel unknown areas along with exact
information
 of distances.Inspite of
this
 with the facility of
internet
 masses can read books on various subjects.
Internet
 has proved a best
source
 of obtaining
information
 in
such
 covid pandemic period.
Additionally
,
internet
 has made individual more socially active which is helpful for societal harmony , with the help
internet
 masses get well of their near one by using various social application which sometime proves as a best
source
 of having
information
.
Internet
 has become a major
source
 of getting
information
 on various areas like : Study ,banking and online businesses.
Moreover
,
internet
 provides an access to get subject wise knowledge at an affordable cost any time ,which saves time and money. For exapmle: It has proved a significant help in the field of digital banking as well as business development ,which are being operated with the help of
internet
 globally.
Consequently
, it has proved all around
information
 is easily available with single click. To Conclude,
Internet
 has become a major
source
 of
information
 in almost areas of present time, which has made human life advance and easier.
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