some people say that now we can see films on our phones or Tablet there is no need to go to cinema others say that to be fully enjoyed films to be seen in a cinema

Nevertheless
, graphics and
Technology
makes the
cinema
vital and attractive society a segment of society believe that now we can see films on our phones
tablet
there is no need to go to
cinema
while another point that to be fully enjoyed films to be seen in theatres
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I
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would like to delve both the argument before forming an opinion.
To begin
,with
first
and promo style
Technology
give up left to the electronic gadget in New Era and to attract
children
and young sister more to watch
movies
in the use of electronic gadgets are more so young
children
use electronic as social things and
also
to watch
movies
in
cell
phones or tablets watching
movies
in
cell
phones helps to save time rather than to go
cinema
and 10 Days long lines to buy tickets which is wastage of time and money
for example
lot of site create free watching
movies
sites to watch
furthermore
using electronic gadgets are safer to watch
movies
throughout busy routine of parents let them buy a
cell
phone to their
children
to watch
movies
rather go
cinema
Hans watching
movies
in
cell
or
Tablet
are good Nor going
cinema
On the other hand
graphics and
Technology
creates theatres vital to watch
movies
use of
technology
in
theatre
is high class and give a better
experience
of sound and display which attract pupils to watch
movies
in
theatre
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, for example,
show examples
for example
a good sound system experiment system and digital display give better
experience
moreover
mostly new release
movies
are available in
theatre
rather than
Cell
Phone or
Tablet
which create curiosity in
children
's to go to watch on
cinema
Hans
theatre
give a lot of better
experience
of watching
movies
and attract youngsters To conclude considering all the points mentioned above electronic gadgets like
cell
phone and
tablet
is helpful to watch
movies
that are to go
cinema
and save time but
also
experience
of watching
movies
in the
theatre
is different which attract youngsters
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