Computers are becoming an essential part of education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

Advancement in technology has changed the way of learning and
computers
are playing
crucial
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role in
this
changing trend.
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the positive
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and negative effects of
computers
in education before forming an opinion.
To begin
with supremacy,
computers
transformed the learning style and it is becoming easier for many
people
to learn even from remote places. Many courses are available online where
people
can enrol and study through online portals that
helps
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many working
people
to enhance their skills.
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many certified universities
runs
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online courses so
students
from all over the country can learn from
comfort
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of their home.
For instance
, during
pandemic
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many universities and colleges adopted online learning for the safety of
students
and teachers and it
also
helped many graduates to finish their courses on time.
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on
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other
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side, there are certain disadvantages related to computer learning.
Firstly
, in many
countries
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computers
are still considered as
luxury
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gadget and not affordable to many
people
.
In
addition
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there are many online security issues that
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to identity thefts and scam with
students
.
For
example
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students
with limited skills are unable to identify phishing attacks that cause mental and financial issues for them.
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there are many study concepts that require physical or one on one training
that is
not accessible through
computers
. In conclusion,
computers
are
crucial
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part of our learning and there
are
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more precedence
then
drawbacks that
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to
be address
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. In my opinion in future
computers
will overtake the entire education system.
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