Computers are becoming an essential part of education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.
Advancement in technology has changed the way of learning and
computers
are playing crucial
role in Add an article
a crucial
this
changing trend. This
essay will highlight positive
and negative effects of Add an article
the positive
computers
in education before forming an opinion.
To begin
with supremacy, computers
transformed the learning style and it is becoming easier for many people
to learn even from remote places. Many courses are available online where people
can enrol and study through online portals that helps
many working Change the verb form
help
people
to enhance their skills. Moreover
many certified universities Add a comma
,Moreover
runs
online courses so Change the verb form
run
students
from all over the country can learn from comfort
of their home. Add an article
the comfort
For instance
, during pandemic
many universities and colleges adopted online learning for the safety of Add a comma
,pandemic
students
and teachers and it also
helped many graduates to finish their courses on time.
However
on Add a comma
,However
Add an article
the other
other
side, there are certain disadvantages related to computer learning. Change the wording
another
Firstly
, in many countries
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,countries
computers
are still considered as luxury
gadget and not affordable to many Add an article
a luxury
people
. In
addition
there are many online security issues that Add a comma
,addition
leads
to identity thefts and scam with Change the verb form
lead
students
. For
example
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,example
students
with limited skills are unable to identify phishing attacks that cause mental and financial issues for them. Lastly
there are many study concepts that require physical or one on one training Add a comma
,Lastly
that is
not accessible through computers
.
In conclusion, computers
are crucial
part of our learning and there Add an article
a crucial
are
more precedence Change the verb form
is
then
drawbacks that needs
to Change the verb form
need
be address
. In my opinion in future Change the verb form
be addressed
computers
will overtake the entire education system.Submitted by cheema_22 on
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