It is common nowadays for each member of the family to have their own piece of modern technology. Some people think this will lead to a break down in family relations and communication. To what extent do you agree?

The vast majority of people nowadays use their own smartphones and laptops. Today, we do not often talk with our parents and children face-to-face, and

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tendency would grow inevitably in the nearest future. I suppose that, if we

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avoid communication with our families in

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world it might lead us to

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destruction of

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connection between relatives.

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, with widely accessible personal devices we could stay in touch with our family members from anywhere, so in the

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we will discuss

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and cons of

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question. To start off, relationships within a family is a fragile thing, and if we replace part of it with advanced technology, we might break it. It seems to me, that if we changed the practice of family-dinners and new-year offline celebration with a zoom conference, we would lose the sense of unity with our clan.

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, your old grandmother might not figure out how to handle an online conference call and omit your party. Not only unpleasant things come with sophisticated technologies, previously if you wanted to stay in touch with someone,

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have paid a personal visit, right now it is not that complicated.

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access to the world wide web, you could search your close relatives

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pages and have up to date data about their life. From my point of view, relationships in 2021 are more solid,

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because you can decide any place on the Earth to live, and still have a chance to wish your mother or granny a happy birthday while looking her in the eyes. To conclude, messengers and social media did make

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breakthrough in communication, and their impact on our lives is significant. We speak and chat with our close people even if we can not meet in the real world,

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it is not a clever idea to completely reduce offline meetings

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because our old family members sometimes didn’t cover

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technological gap.