More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays many young kids are facing obesity and it is increasing alarmingly in all the grown countries. It is a major concern across the globe.
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essay elaborates the main causes of overweighting of youngsters and Linking Words
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a few major effects with obese.
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and foremost, why many children are suffering from fatness? One of the main causes of fatness is junk foodstuff and no physical activity. In Linking Words
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context, countless young teenagers are not eating proper hygienic food as in developed countries both the parents are working and busy with their office commitments, they could not spend time to cook healthy food for their child. Children are not allocating spare time to exercising Linking Words
moreover
they are investing maximum duration on television, laptops and video games etc. Linking Words
For Instance
, more young people are attracted to fast foods like pizza, burgers as well as soft drinks that lead to more obesity.
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Secondly
, if a juvenile is suffering from overweight Linking Words
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it has severe effects as well. Mainly, many youngsters are suffering from diabetics and Linking Words
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attack. Use synonyms
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to adults, grown-up kids are facing Linking Words
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attack in young age because of unhealthy food and diabetics count in youth are Use synonyms
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growing rapidly around the world. It is the major concern in the younger generation.Linking Words
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, recently one college student is suffering from excess overweight from childhood Linking Words
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stroke in childhood and is in a critical situation.
To sum up, one of the major causes that many obesity kids are facing Use synonyms
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stroke etc across the nation. To overcome Use synonyms
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concern, parents need to play a significant role in their children healthy life and younger generation makes the nation strong.Linking Words
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