Some environmentalists have advocated building wildlife sanctuaries to protect endangered species. Discuss the Advantages and disadvantages of doing this.

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Over the past few decades, the world had seen a lot of
animals
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being extinct, while few of them are on the verge of it. Few environmental scientists believe that these
animals
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can be saved from extinction by securing them in sanctuaries. As a matter of fact that, every coin has two sides, even
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belief has pros and cons.
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essay discusses the advantages and in the latter half, the disadvantages will be covered. On the one hand, it will be a very good measure to ensure the safety of
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by providing a home in locked areas.
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, these creatures will be protected from being hunted either from
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who rely on these as prey for food or even from humans for their wicked uses.
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, the Indian government has taken a few actions to save white tigers over the country by sheltering them.
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, not only white tigers are rescued but
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their offsprings are produced.
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, the biggest concern arising from the caging of
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is their restriction to move. Most of the creatures in the wild have the freedom to do what they want to.
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, by trapping them in grills and fences their movement is restricted. They should eat food provided by zookeepers at particular timings.
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, recently the white elephants were caged in Africa to save them from being extinct as they were killed for their worthy tusks, but these elephants were not able to withstand the new habitat and died. To summarise,
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the vision to secure the endangered wild creatures by making them live in sanctuaries is feasible, there is a downside to it that not every animal can sustain an environment
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not natural to them. So, environmental scientists should consider these into account to save the species.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • endangered species
  • biodiversity
  • ecological balance
  • eco-tourism
  • wildlife conservation
  • sanctuaries
  • habitats
  • ethical concerns
  • dependency
  • preservation
  • educational opportunities
  • economic benefits
  • isolation
  • intervention
  • overcrowded
  • finite resources
  • behavioral changes
  • conservation efforts
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