In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays it is argued that people will read everything they want online for free rather reading printed

books

, magazines or newspapers. In my point of view, online reading will be more common and popular in the future due to its great comfort and availability.

First

of all,

current

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the current

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time everyone has an access to

Internet

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the Internet

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where all

books

, news, articles are located and they can effortlessly read everything they want in

everytime

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For example

, nowadays people do not need to go to the shops or library to find a book they want, it is easy to find it

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the Internet in several minutes.

Also

, there are a lot of devices which are comfortable to read like tablets and mobile phones.

In other words

, new gadgets make reading more comfortable and enjoyable by replacing

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printed

books

In addition

, it is possible to read online for free. Readers can read their

books

every time online

instead

of trying to hurry and give the

books

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back.

For instance

, there are a lot of websites

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the internet like “

loveread

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overhead

love read

.ec” where everybody has access to different types of

books

. In conclusion, I strongly agree with

this

statement as online reading is becoming more reliable due to different websites and it is cheaper than printed

books

and sometimes

more comfy

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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