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Some believe in enrolling their children into the best schools so that they learn to socialize while others believe that homeschooling is a better option. Discuss both views and where do you stand on this topic?

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Few
people
 argue that
children
 can socialize in
schools
however
 some others are of the opinion that
home
tution
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tuition
 is a better
way
. In my view, schooling is a better
way
 to socialize
children
.
This
 essay
firstly
 discusses on how schooling can help mingle with other
people
 and in the
later
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 half, describes how
home
tution
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tuition
 is not the best option. On the one hand, socialization means to have interaction with
people
.
This
 can be easily achieved by going to a place where population density is more. In
case
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 of
children
,
schools
 are the best places where they can interact with other students, learn about subjects, etiquettes,
diiferent
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different
 cultures and make friends.
For example
, most of the
people
 who have a good friend circle have more acquaintances from
schools
.
This
way
children
 can socialize effectively and build a bond that lasts long.
On the other hand
,
although
 teaching
children
in
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home
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 can help them in socializing, it is not the best
way
. In
this
 method the biggest drawback would be the child does not get many
people
 to interact with.
For instance
, while
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in
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home
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the home
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 we can communicate with very few
people
 like family members and neighbours.
Consequently
, the connection circle gets affected. To summarize, it is easier to achieve socialization in a place with more crowd than a place with less population. I firmly believe that
,
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schools
 can enable
children
 to be open and interactive.
That is
 why
this
 essay echos the opinion that schooling
children
is
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the
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 effective
way
 to interact and gain contacts than homeschooling.
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