some people say that now we can see films on our phone or tablets and there is no need to go to the cinema. Other say that to be fully enjoyed,films need to be seen in cinema. Describe both these views and give your opinion.

Many individuals think that they can watch any kind of
movies
in the electronic gadgets
such
as mobile devices or laptops
instead
of visiting a theatre, whereas others consider that in cinema hall they can
experience
a better enjoyment.
Besides
, both the views will be elaborating in a detail description along with my opinion at the end.
Firstly
, nowadays technology has made a dramatic change across the globe. Here, in the present
world
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every mankind is using electronic appliances in their day to day life particularly smartphones to watch
movies
in their own residence. In fact, all kind of generation people is not interested to go to big cinemas or any cinema hall for seeing films
instead
at home only they are seeing all
movies
and it is more economical as well.
For Example
,the younger generation is preferring OTT platforms
such
as Netflix to watch
movies
in their comfort zone with the help of mobile phones or tablets
instead
of visiting any cinema theatre.
On the other hand
, few public is believing that watching any films on the big screen provides a unique
experience
. In
this
context, any electronic devices like smartphones cannot give you the same feel and entertainment as seeing in the movie hall,
also
one cannot
experience
the same picture clarity,sound effects and
environment
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like sitting in a chair with popcorns and soft drinks along with friends or family members.
Hence
, any electronic gadgets cannot be replaced by a movie screen and their facilities.
For Instance
, 3D
movies
cannot be experienced
same
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in a mobile phone as
theatre
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a theatre
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without 3D glasses especially
movies
like Avengers and Jurassic World. To Conclude,
many
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younger generation preferring smart devices to see films. In my opinion, always watch any movie on the big screen
instead
of mobiles as we spend some quality time with dear ones and it feels great
experience
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and unique feel.
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