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Many countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Is this a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, the
hospitality
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 industry noticeably increasingly stronger before
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 pandemic. In each country has the different attractions knows how to grab
people
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's attention, especially famous places around the world
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 as France, New York, Vietnam and so much more, where tourist used to choose for their vacation
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 and made the tourist industries developed. Everything has been improved since 2000, transports development, education, life and even leisure time. In
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 modern life,
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 choose to have a vacation after months of working and study hard by travelling around the world for enjoy the services and explore a new
culture
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 which is a great thing to develop and grow the
business
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. Those
people
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 who travelled has contributed for the
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 industry, and the " multinational corporations" is a good impact to the tourism services by bringing different style architectures created in our country, and
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 particular reason for the circumstances, more jobs have been created and the salary is increasing. The more
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 going to travel, the more foreign agencies were opened officially, and it leads to more restaurant, hotel and resorts sharply increased with middle-class and high-end class services. The
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business
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 can make a great extend money by attractive visitors with a stunning view and high-end places, it can help their
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 expand.
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 food is a part of tourist too, the cuisine and consumer famous everywhere for everyone want to experience and enjoy the premium products. In conclusion, I do not see any positive about
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 nowadays due to everyone enjoy and curious wanted to explore the world,
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 it helps the
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 going up. Especially, the country has a diverse
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 can attractive different nationalities want to know your
culture
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 and cuisine.
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