Some people think it is important to wpend on roads and highways than on public transport systems such as railways and trams. To what extent do you agree or diagree?

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Some people consider spending money on roads and infrastructure more important than

transport

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networks

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as trams and railways.I agree with

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point of view,

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, there are some advantages and disadvantages to both systems.

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, the Development of roads and highways is necessary for economic activities, especially in rural and remote areas where public

transport

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may not be feasible.

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, without well-developed roads, we cannot to drive the nearest hospital, school and drugstores by car.

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, about purchasing and receiving online products that are delivered anywhere we want, if it were not highways, we cannot receive them, because trucks bring products to us. Well-developed highways will enable economic growth

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because it facilitates the movement of goods and services directly. In fact, a lot of products growing in rural areas, and developed infrastructure will influence in delivery

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this

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product.

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it will leave a carbon footprint and pollution in the ecosystem.

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, in urban areas

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network will be more important. Because it is more sustainable and efficient.

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, public

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can significantly reduce traffic jams and pollution. It has an environmental impact and emission reduction.

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, Dutch has one of the clearest oxygen levels on the earth, because the Dutch

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network is one of the most accessible and convenient.

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, the public transportation system is something necessary in our lives which we have to preserve. In conclusion,

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strongly believe that maintaining public transportation is important

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the infrastructure for local governments.

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there are some merits and demerits for both sides

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Refine your conclusion to directly reflect and summarize the arguments discussed in the essay.

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The essay provides relevant examples to expand on the points made, particularly in discussing the advantages of roads and public transport.

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There is a clear introduction and conclusion, which frames the essay’s discussion well.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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4 paragraphs

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Topic Vocabulary:

infrastructure development
economic growth
sustainability
carbon footprint
traffic congestion
public transport
accessibility
mobility
urban planning
investment priorities
social equity
environmental impact
emission reduction
remote areas
transport network
feasibility
diversified investment

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