A new generation of entrepreneurs believe that privately funded space tourism will be the next exciting development in space exploration. How true do you think this is? How would space tourism affect space exploration as we know it today?

Many young entrepreneurs consider that support of

private

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sector for

space

tourism

are able to be

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a new

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way to explore

space

. I believe that

space

tourism

would be an immersive

activity

for many

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this

reason, it can be supplied more money to spend on

space

area and its expensive equipment

such

as

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telescopes, rockets and human resources.

Also

, political support might be increased with huge public attention

To begin

with, there is a broad consensus amongst experts that the problematic issue for

space

research is lack of investment and funding. In general,

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are

reluctunt

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reluctant

to invest money on

this

exploration owing to many fruitless attempts that are made before.

This

activity

can be attractive

for most part

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of society. With

this

attraction

funding

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drawbacks can be solved. Research can

be convey

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independently regardless of

financial

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the financial

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budget.

Thus

,

space

tourism

has a behemoth potential to supply adequate money for

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searches and

space

companies. It is important to bear in mind that plenty of

space

researches have been suffering from

lack

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of financial and political support. With developing

space

tourism

, investors are able to be more generous when

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compare

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the past. Because of

that

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they would see income which might come from

space

tourism

.

Moreover

, many

government

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governments

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have seen

space

researches as a retrenchment for budget and it should be cut as possible. When

space

tourism

started to rise up,

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can change their decision with regards to revenue from the

activity

.

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, more funding

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able to be supplied by governments and investors with

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to

bright

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potential of

this

unique experience. To conclude, touristic

activity

to

space

has been seen as a spark to start a new era in

the

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space

exploration by many young

entreprenuers

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entrepreneurs

. The aim of

this

essay is to agree

with

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that

space

tourism

are able to be a viable alternative for both financially and

also

politically.