Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides.

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With the increase in pollution and consumption of junk food,
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of health is becoming highly
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topic, while some supports that daily activities are beneficial for health and other says healthy food consumption is
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both viewpoints.
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with physical training, it is important for
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posture of
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, many doctors suggest that engaging in 30 minutes of daily fitness session will helps individuals to loose over 100 calories.
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helps in rehabilitation as many people do yoga, cardio, and pilates to treat their muscle injuries and its fast and proven method certified by doctors from all over the world.
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of celebrities and sports players hires personal trainers because they know without having
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, it is difficult to perform in their area of expertise. On
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side, various people suggested
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that
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habits
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fitness of human beings. Problems of
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diabetes
, blood pressure, and obesity are directly related
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bad nutrition. There are many online websites that
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information about cooking style and ingredients that don't have any negative effects on
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, keeping food intake in control
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helps in
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loosing
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weight without going
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the gym
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, there are many trainers who work as a certified diet expert that helps individuals to achieve health goals excluding any fitness classes. To sum up, it is very important for everyone to keep their
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of healthy eating and performing some physical activity.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cardiovascular health
  • Metabolism
  • Chronic diseases
  • Immune system
  • Mental well-being
  • Nutrients
  • Malnutrition
  • Obesity
  • Type 2 diabetes
  • Circulation
  • Nutrient distribution
  • Preventive health
  • Energy levels
  • Balanced diet
  • Essential nutrients
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