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The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph represents the average temperature and precipitation throughout the year, in the city of Kolkata. Clearly, the highest amount of rainfall was observed in the
months
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 of July and August, which was close to 350
mm
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, followed by September and June with around 300 and 250
mm
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 respectively. The precipitation seemed to gradually rise in the
months
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 of January to May, until 100
mm
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, whereas, it plummeted post-October after receiving a good 150
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 of rainfall.
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, the average temperature graph somehow seemed to have maintained a substantial figure. The highest temperature was observed between the
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 of April to June. There was not much difference observed in temperatures from July to October. A gradual declination was observed post-October, whereas, an increase was seen from January to March. Overall, higher rainfall was noticed in the
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 of July and August, whilst soaring temperatures in Kolkata was detected between April to June.
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