Fast food is a part of life in many place. Some people think this has bad effects in lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons.

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are essential and others think that it will cause poor health diet and way of life. I totally agree with

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notion because it gives

unhealthy

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an unhealthy

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habit to be lazy and makes everyone obes.

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with, we want easy and fast due to modern world which makes us busy and

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don't

have time to cook

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in our home and just contented with the

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and

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that so fast to make or

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. A busy parent

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instance, they are tired from work when they are coming so

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of cooking in their own kitchen they would choose to buy from any

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chain and get a ready to eat

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.

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habit will become a lifestyle and make them lazy in doing their responsibility to make good and healthy

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for there kids.

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, it will give bad effect

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their life which their character and attitude of doing the proper way

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of eating

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.

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,

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that has a lot of fats, cholesterol and

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makes the person ill.

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for

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example, burger, pizza and fries are the

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that will cause a person

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obes

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.

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, it will lead them to depression and low

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and most people affected by

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are the youngsters, who work late, who live alone and have no time and

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to cook would choose to buy

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of

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that is

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easy but unhealthy.

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, if we continue patronizing these products, it will us to poor diet and sicknesses in the near future. To conclude,

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or fast

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era become part of everyday life of many, though

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is

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, we will not forget that

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poor unhealthy lifestyle and diet will lead us to

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and not good habit.