Fast food is a part of life in many place. Some people think this has bad effects in lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons.
In today's
generation
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,generation
instant
food
are essential and others think that it will cause poor health diet and way of life. I totally agree with this
notion because it gives unhealthy
habit to be lazy and makes everyone obes.
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an unhealthy
To begin
with, we want easy and fast due to modern world which makes us busy and dont
have time to cook Correct your spelling
don't
food
in our home and just contented with the take away
and Join the words
takeaway
food
that so fast to make or instant
food
. A busy parent for
instance, they are tired from work when they are coming so Add the comma(s)
,for
instead
of cooking in their own kitchen they would choose to buy from any fast
Add a hyphen
fast-food
food
chain and get a ready to eat food
. Also
, this
habit will become a lifestyle and make them lazy in doing their responsibility to make good and healthy food
for there kids. Therefore
, it will give bad effect to
their life which their character and attitude of doing the proper way Change preposition
on
eating
Change preposition
of eating
food
.
Secondly
, food
that has a lot of fats, cholesterol and presevatives
makes the person ill. Correct your spelling
preservatives
Instant
food
for
example, burger, pizza and fries are the Add the comma(s)
,for
food
that will cause a person become
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to become
obes
. Correct your spelling
obese
Moreover
, it will lead them to depression and low of
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apply
self esteem
and most people affected by Add a hyphen
self-esteem
this
are the youngsters, who work late, who live alone and have no time and tired
to cook would choose to buy Correct your spelling
tried
these kind
of Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
food
that is
easy but unhealthy. However
, if we continue patronizing these products, it will us to poor diet and sicknesses in the near future.
To conclude, instant
food
or fast food
in this
era become part of everyday life of many, though this
is trend
, we will not forget that Add an article
a trend
the trend
this
poor unhealthy lifestyle and diet will lead us to harmful
and not good habit.Add an article
a harmful
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