Fast food is a part of life in many place. Some people think this has bad effects in lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons.

In today's
generation
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instant
food
are essential and others think that it will cause poor health diet and way of life. I totally agree with
this
notion because it gives
unhealthy
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an unhealthy
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habit to be lazy and makes everyone obes.
To begin
with, we want easy and fast due to modern world which makes us busy and
dont
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don't
have time to cook
food
in our home and just contented with the
take away
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takeaway
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and
food
that so fast to make or
instant
food
. A busy parent
for
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instance, they are tired from work when they are coming so
instead
of cooking in their own kitchen they would choose to buy from any
fast
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fast-food
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food
chain and get a ready to eat
food
.
Also
,
this
habit will become a lifestyle and make them lazy in doing their responsibility to make good and healthy
food
for there kids.
Therefore
, it will give bad effect
to
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their life which their character and attitude of doing the proper way
eating
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of eating
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food
.
Secondly
,
food
that has a lot of fats, cholesterol and
presevatives
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preservatives
makes the person ill.
Instant
food
for
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example, burger, pizza and fries are the
food
that will cause a person
become
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obes
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obese
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.
Moreover
, it will lead them to depression and low
of
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self esteem
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self-esteem
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and most people affected by
this
are the youngsters, who work late, who live alone and have no time and
tired
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tried
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to cook would choose to buy
these kind
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this kind
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of
food
that is
easy but unhealthy.
However
, if we continue patronizing these products, it will us to poor diet and sicknesses in the near future. To conclude,
instant
food
or fast
food
in
this
era become part of everyday life of many, though
this
is
trend
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a trend
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, we will not forget that
this
poor unhealthy lifestyle and diet will lead us to
harmful
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a harmful
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and not good habit.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prevalence
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • culinary culture
  • wholesome meals
  • inherently
  • health consequences
  • nutritional options
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