some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. discuss both view and give your opinion.

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thanks to
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more sociable but some
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don't disagree
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is making them less sociable. They think getting together with friends less often because of
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • online marketplaces
  • mobile payment options
  • personalized advertising
  • accessibility
  • compare prices
  • decision fatigue
  • impulse buying
  • financial imprudence
  • privacy and data security
  • transformed
  • streamlined
  • user-friendly
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