It is more important for governments to spend public funds on promoting a healthy lifestyle than treatment Do you agree or disagree?

We live in a

fast paced

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environements

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environments

environment

, where the critical role of the

government

is to take

care

of their citizens, by

utlizing

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utilizing

the public funds for healthy

lifestyle

and

tretament

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treatment

.

Although

, I think

governement

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government

should give equal importance

of

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their expenditure

to

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both healthy

lifestyle

, and

treatment

of their

people

. On one hand, it is important for the

government

to

utlize

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utilize

these funds building parks around the residential communities, adding sports facilities, and installing bins are few of the efforts

government

can take for promoting a good

lifestyle

. Not only

this

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government

regulators managing the

labor

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laws

also

plays a critical role in promoting healthy work culture and

restrictling

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restricting

companies to push any employees working above the threshold.

Such

policies

makes

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sure that employees have good

work life

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balance and

also

governement

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government

supporting them with various

recretional

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recreational

activities.

On the contrary

, taking

care

of the health of the citizens is equally important and every

efforts

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should be put

to

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make

treatment

possible for everyone whether a rich or the poor. Medical facilities and

treatment

should be equal for everyone in

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society.

However

,

this

is not only critical just for the citizens but for the growth of the economy as well.

For instance

, in the situation of

pandemic

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a pandemic

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like COVID-19, the

government

should make sure that the

vacciness

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vaccines

vaccine

are available for everyone in the country. Taking

care

of

people

by the

governemnt

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government

in

such

diffcult

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difficult

times helps in progressing the economy in a positive direction. To conclude, governments should make sure that the public funds are utilized not just for promoting

healthy

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lifestyle

,

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but taking

care

and

treatment

of all their

people

within the country. Maintaining

this

balance

also

reflects the

government

concerns for their

people

which put them with

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positive outlook across the globe. Being someone from sports fraternity, I am very thankful to

Canadian

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government

for taking

care

of both of these issues positively.