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Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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Aeroplanes are being used more often to transfer products to the nations where
people
 cannot grow them or they have a different season at that time. The main drawback is that the
cost
 of the vegetables and fruits gets increased while sending to a different country, it is used as a medicine for patients is the primary benefit of it. Sending vegetable and fruits through the air system increased the actual
cost
 of the product.
This
 is to say that companies have to preserve them carefully in a refrigerator in order to prevent them from the deterioration that increases the
cost
 and air companies
also
 charge a heavy amount to deliver them to a different state.
For example
, Produces that are being imported usually available at relatively high prices in markets as compared to the products that are locally available in the country. The primary advantage of
this
 is that they are available for the
people
 who are dependent on them.
This
 is because there are many vegetable and fruits that help
people
 with their diseases and are not available in their state, so they can import them from different countries that grow them.
For instance
, Avocado is the vegetable
that is
 being used as a medicine by the heart patient and it is grown in North America, so the
people
 in Asia and other parts of the world import it to solve their heart issues. In conclusion, Aeroplanes are being used more frequently to send products to different countries, the main drawback is that their
cost
 gets increased while reaching to another nation, availability for the patients who are depending upon them is the biggest advantage.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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