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Computers are becoming an essential part of education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

#computers #part #education
Today in
this
 contemporary world, there is an advance increase in various technologies.
Computer
 plays an essential role in various sectors. In
education
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computer
 plays a vital role but
on the other
hand
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 there are some cons of using
computers
.
Further
 in
this
essay
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 we will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using
computers
 in
a
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 field of
education
.
To begin
 with, there are lots of transformation happened in the field of
education
from
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last
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the last
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 few decades due to
invention
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the invention
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 of
computer
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the computer
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.
Firstly
computer
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the computer
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 is a source where
any one
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anyone
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 can get various
information
 to gain knowledge. We can save lectures videos
in
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computer
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the computer
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,
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apply
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 so that
students
 can access those videos and learn at any time if they missed the offline lecture. In covid 19
situation
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, many schools were off and
students
 were got disturbed. But because of advance
tecnology
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technology
, lectures didn't
stopped
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,
online
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the online
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 class was started and
students
 were able to attend lectures online from
computer
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a computer
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. Various educational
information
 has been provided online which help
students
 to cope up with their assignments and project.
On the contrary
,
computers
 have some disadvantages too. In our global village, many
students
 got attached
with
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computer
 work. Because of
this
,
plethora
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a plethora
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 of
students
have
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defect
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a defect
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 in
eyes
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the eyes
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. Because sitting in front of
computers
 for a long time causes strain on an eye.
Also
 on
computer
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the computer
a computer
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, while browsing for
an
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information
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information
, not all the
information
 are authentic. So many
students
 get
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mislead
misleaded
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misled
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 by wrong
information
 and end up resulting in bad grades. Due to
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the increase
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increase
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 use of
computers
, young youth are very apathy towards doing outdoor activities. Physical activities are reduced due to more use of
computers
 which causes health issues later To sum up,
computers
 have their pros and cons
on
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education
. But it is an essential part of
education
 because advantages outweigh the cons of
computers
.
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