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Many people travel by air these days. What are the advantages and disadvantage of air travels?

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Nowadays,
air
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travel
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 is more preferred BY THE PUBLIC. There are many advantages and disadvantage FOR
people
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 going somewhere in
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 way.
Air
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travel
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 provides
people
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 with
time
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-SAVING and comfort.
People
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 can SAVE
time
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 by travelling by
plane
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. At the present
time
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,
AIR
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travel
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 is more used to explore new places or work meeting.
This
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travel
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 offers
people
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 more comfort. While you cannot move on a bus, you can move very easily on A
plane
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 and even go to the toilet.
Air
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travel
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 may be preferred especially for these reasons. Let's take that we are on the
plane
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,
for example
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; It is necessary to go to a meeting
to
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 another country and during
this
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travel
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, the meeting notes can be reviewed much more comfortably and you can even have the opportunity to work in the accommodation because it saves a lot of
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.
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, CRITICAL events cannot be PREVENTED while on the
plane
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.
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, the
plane
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 may cause some problems regarding health issues. When a pregnant woman gives birth on a
plane
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, if a doctor is not available, the baby and mother can be lost. A normal person can have a heart attack. Health is a CRITICAL issue, so most
people
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 do not prefer to
travel
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 by
plane
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. By way of conclusion,
air
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travel
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 has not only pros but
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 CONS. While
air
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travel
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 is preferred due to
time
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 and comfort reasons,
people
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 with health risks will not prefer
this
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 journey.

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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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