In some schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subjects (e.g. literature), and boys tend to choose science subjects (e.g. physics). Why do you think this is so? Should this tendency be changed? Do you agree or disagree
In many
universitis
,it is observed that most of the girls have more inclination towards choosing Correct your spelling
universities
art related
Add a hyphen
art-related
subjects
whereas majority
of boys choose S.T.E.M Add an article
the majority
subjects
.Thus
,some people hold the opinion that this
trend shoud
be changed for the greater good.,Correct your spelling
should
However
, i
am totally against it.Change the capitalization
I
This
essay describs
reasons for my disagreement.
Correct your spelling
describes
First
of all,I believe that education is all about enhancing our ingrained talent in the domain of our likes.Hence
,it would be inappropriate to compell
people to choose Correct your spelling
compel
specific
field.Add an article
a specific
For instance
,if someone chooses a stream wherein he is having no interest then
there are high chances that he might fail to complete the course or even if he completes that,his true talent will never be cultivated and as a consequence
he will get depressed or loath the work he will be doing in future.Add a comma
,consequence
Therefore
,it is always a good idea to give students full rein over the selection of the subjects
that they are going to study in universities.
Secondly
,if everyone chooses subjects
related to science and technology than significance
of arts and culture will Add an article
the significance
be decrease
in the society of that nation and that will attribute to Change the verb form
decrease
extinction
of many indigenous Add an article
the extinction
form
of arts.Probably,Change to a plural noun
forms
this
is the prime reason why in many countries,there is an
immense community support for the institutes that runs exclusive Remove the article
apply
couses
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causes
courses
pertaning
to aboriginal art and culture.To illustrate,in Newzealand,there are many Correct your spelling
pertaining
pertain
community driven
colleges that Add a hyphen
community-driven
invites
interested students across the globe to learn traditional Maori carving and crafting.
To conclude,it will be an unwise move to force students to pursue certain Change the verb form
invite
subjects
just because of their gender.It is not only a violance
of their fundamental rights but will Correct your spelling
violence
violent
also
lead to cosiderable
brain drain.Correct your spelling
considerable
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