In some schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subjects (e.g. literature), and boys tend to choose science subjects (e.g. physics). Why do you think this is so? Should this tendency be changed? Do you agree or disagree

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universities
,it is observed that most of the girls have more inclination towards choosing
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subjects
whereas
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of boys choose S.T.E.M
subjects
.
Thus
,some people hold the opinion that
this
trend
shoud
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should
be changed for the greater good.,
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,
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am totally against it.
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reasons for my disagreement.
First
of all,I believe that education is all about enhancing our ingrained talent in the domain of our likes.
Hence
,it would be inappropriate to
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compel
people to choose
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field.
For instance
,if someone chooses a stream wherein he is having no interest
then
there are high chances that he might fail to complete the course or even if he completes that,his true talent will never be cultivated and as a
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he will get depressed or loath the work he will be doing in future.
Therefore
,it is always a good idea to give students full rein over the selection of the
subjects
that they are going to study in universities.
Secondly
,if everyone chooses
subjects
related to science and technology than
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of arts and culture will
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in the society of that nation and that will attribute to
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of many indigenous
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of arts.Probably,
this
is the prime reason why in many countries,there is
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immense community support for the institutes that runs exclusive
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causes
courses
pertaning
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pertaining
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to aboriginal art and culture.To illustrate,in Newzealand,there are many
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colleges that
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interested students across the globe to learn traditional Maori carving and crafting. To conclude,it will be an unwise move to force students to pursue certain
subjects
just because of their gender.It is not only a
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violence
violent
of their fundamental rights but will
also
lead to
cosiderable
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considerable
brain drain.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social stereotypes
  • gender roles
  • arts subjects
  • science subjects
  • parental expectations
  • upbringing
  • role models
  • underrepresentation
  • STEM
  • curriculum bias
  • educational system
  • teacher bias
  • school environment
  • personal interests
  • natural aptitudes
  • gender representation
  • economic factors
  • job prospects
  • cultural expectations
  • historical context
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