Transport delays and long journey are widespread phenomenon in many cities today. What are the causes of this problem, and how could the situation be improved?

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world many
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have problems regarding traffic and
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delays in urban centres.
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problem and
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possible solution to diminish its effects.
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with, numerous people who had been living in rural areas over the
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decades are being attracted to live in urbanized centres;
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are growing rapidly and developing, among other issues, serious problems regarding
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infrastructure of
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, the necessity of having mobility and the lack of investment in public transportation stimulate people to buy their own vehicles, which contribute even more to traffic jam and delays in
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, especially in rush hours. To illustrate
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, São Paulo,
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biggest
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in the world has almost
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car per citizen and
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of the worst traffic jams in Latin America.
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possible solution might be to stimulate the private sector to take their part
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in solutions and infrastructure for public transportation. There are specialized companies which have
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expertise with governments partnerships regarding the management of massive public
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methods.
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, for the past ten years, improvements and control of New York metro,
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of the most famous public
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systems in the world, are the responsibility of a partnership between the New York City Council and private companies. It is important to point out that the arrangement in public-private partnerships can be negotiated freely,
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to the objectives and goals previously determined. To conclude, the massive migration of people to urbanized centres and the high numbers of cars in
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represent some of the possible causes
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transport
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delays and long journeys. Creating partnerships between public and private sector might be the solution to develop public transportation properly.
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