Having a good university degree guarantees people a good job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The master's degrees can influence on person
job
status,but there is arguing that it's not necessary for that person with higher education are working in top companies.I partially agree with the above statement.
to begin
,
university
education usually leads to professional or corporate jobs. it is believed that
university
course provided the filed experience and good knowledge.
moreover
there are lots of campus interviews organized by the
university
on campus. For that ,reason there are high chances of getting a more paying
job
.
For instance
, I have graduated from the
University
of Gulph and I got my
first
job
as a physiotherapist in my internship placement clinic.Not only that I got lots of offer letter from so many other companies.
Although
there are other factors,which can lead to labour jobs like an administrative
job
or factory work in spite of having a
university
degree.
Furthermore
, it
also
depends on the
student
's efforts and the percentage of
student
got during their academic year. they
also
required some year of experience and knowledge to get top positions
job
.
For example
, the
student
did not perform well during their exam and they do not have any motivation of getting a good
job
then
they would try to apply for the
job
.
Furthermore
, it
also
depends on which
university
youngster studied. Because the environment of the
university
is not appropriate than the
student
will go on the wrong path and it will destroy their carrier. To conclude it is not only getting higher education from
university
but
also
the
student
's efforts ,which can get them in good company or business.
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