Having a good university degree guarantees people a good job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The master's degrees can influence on person

job

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status,but there is arguing that it's not necessary for that person with higher education are working in top companies.I partially agree with the above statement.

to begin

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university

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education usually leads to professional or corporate jobs. it is believed that

university

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course provided the filed experience and good knowledge.

moreover

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there are lots of campus interviews organized by the

university

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on campus. For that ,reason there are high chances of getting a more paying

job

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, I have graduated from the

University

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of Gulph and I got my

first

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job

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as a physiotherapist in my internship placement clinic.Not only that I got lots of offer letter from so many other companies.

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there are other factors,which can lead to labour jobs like an administrative

job

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or factory work in spite of having a

university

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degree.

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, it

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depends on the

student

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's efforts and the percentage of

student

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got during their academic year. they

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required some year of experience and knowledge to get top positions

job

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, the

student

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did not perform well during their exam and they do not have any motivation of getting a good

job

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then

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they would try to apply for the

job

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, it

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depends on which

university

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youngster studied. Because the environment of the

university

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is not appropriate than the

student

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will go on the wrong path and it will destroy their carrier. To conclude it is not only getting higher education from

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but

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the

student

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's efforts ,which can get them in good company or business.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Having a good university degree guarantees people a good job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this? What can be done about this problem?

spending money on the conservation of wildlife animals is a waste of resources. This money would be better spent on other more important things. Do you agree?

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Some people think the government should provide free housing, while others believe it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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