If you were asked to send one thing representing your country to an international exhibition. What would you choose? Why? use specific reasons and details to explore your choice.

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,cultural and heritage is very significant to identify a nation's history.To represent an international exhibition there are many things in my nation.
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,I would like to explain these things in the upcoming paragraph.
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with, the
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and foremost in ancient times there were many types of weapons used by warriors in wars. In India most used weapon was
khanda
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.It was discovered in the northern part of India and related to Sikh religion. It was a two-edged sword and its length about one meter more than it. The tenth
guru
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of Sikhs Shri
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Gobind Singh Ji used
khanda
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to give Sikhs new identity by giving them elixir called Amrit. ,
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it is used in the flag of Sikhs. We
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get many proofs about the use of it in history books.
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,we can represent
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in the international exhibition as it shows the culture of India.It shows youngsters that what type of weapons used in past times. ,
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they come to know how it was a symbol of strength and purity for warriors in past time.
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, Baba deep Singh Ji one of the Sikh warriors was master of using
khanda
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and represent it as a symbol of strength and
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Gobind Singh Ji the tenth Sikh
guru
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represent it as a symbol of purity. In conclusion, after analysing all the above points, I would like to conclude that international exhibitions are not only the way to represent the nation’s culture but
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make youngsters able to know about their heritage and culture.
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