The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase of globalization produce positive effects for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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trading in terms of multinational companies.

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Some people support that increasing globalisation is beneficial for everybody, I tend to agree with the given statement and believe that

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trend not only brings pros but

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has cons to the whole society. On the one hand, the spread of multinationals indeed produces considerable advantages

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all individuals. An apparent example can be seen from a healthy economy which generates higher salaries for all citizens

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of globalisation.

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, another consequence is that

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economic progress ensures governments can have more funds to spend on infrastructure construction

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as public transportation, health care system, education system and environmental protection. Alternatively, rising numbers of multinational sectors provide more job opportunities for all workers in a country.

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, the living standard of the whole country can be improved

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the increasing number of

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, admittedly, more international firms,

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drawbacks to particular groups.

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, environmentalists would face challenges by the destruction of the ecosystem and global warming. Those are the negative results of globalisation, as

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have greater numbers of exports and imports that need huge energies to deliver to other

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, there is a rocketing need for fossil fuels,

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as petroleum and coal, which will emit greenhouse gases and lead to the melting of a glacier in polar areas. I am not optimistic that

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can deal with even a small rise in sea level well. Millions of people would be flooded, especially in coastal areas, and they would lose their jobs, homes, and even life. The potential

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of disease is huge for those residents, which could lead to social instability.

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, on the side of economics,

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surplus and deficit

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, they would face the problem of unemployment and money outflows

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of a failure in

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with other products, which is harmful to

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’ trading power ,international strength and domestic economic growth. In conclusion, I believe that increasing numbers of multinational corporations can produce positive impacts on everyone

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but

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by growing deleterious influences on the whole

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