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Some people say that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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With the advent of digitization across the world, every field has been transformed. Nowadays most
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 use smartphones or tabs in their daily lives, even for little chores. Even though technological advances have changed the way the world used to work and communicate, I agree that a child should start learning and using these modern gadgets after they acquire basic knowledge of writing and reading. Handwriting is one of those crucial aspects that need to be learned because of its usage in case of unavailability of
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 gadgets. With all the advances that science and technology have made, the world is becoming smaller and easily communicable, where everyone is within the reach of others.
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, in instances when someone is stuck in a place where they cannot get hold of gizmos they use,
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 without the basic knowledge of handwriting would help them get out of the situation. Good and understandable handwriting is a necessary skill to acquire for everyone.
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, we, as adults, should help our children learn
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 basic skill. Nowadays, we have
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 tools that can convert a
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 has led to a revolution in communication, as anybody can learn and understand the
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, other
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 are saying, even if they do not know the common
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.
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, being stuck in a region where we do not know the native
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 can be a great problem.
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, if you know how to write in an understandable way, those native folks could
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 help us.
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, handwriting skill is necessary for
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 situations. To conclude, I would like to repeat my thoughts regarding some
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's arguments about the skills of handwriting being taught to children. I disagree with
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 a notion of
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. Handwriting skills should be learnt in one's early phase so that they can get out of situations where they do not have devices to communicate.
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