Everyone should be encouraged to use fewer resources rather than recycle more. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Resources
is an important wealth of our world. Lesser use of resources
is mandatory to prevent depletion of resources
. Some people will argue that,
we should recycle the Remove the comma
apply
resources
rather than using less. I partially agree to
the given above notion.
There Change preposition
with
are
Change the verb form
is
plethora
of natural Add an article
a plethora
resources
available, for
example
solar energy, fossil energy, electrical energy etc. All Add the comma(s)
,example
this
natural Change the determiner
these
resources
are important in our daily life, but the major concern about this
naturally
Change the adverb
natural
resources
is that this
resource are
getting depleted. Not all the Change the verb form
is
resources
are recyclable or renewable. So in such
cases
we need to save our Add a comma
,cases
resources
to prevent our world. Using less non renewable
Add a hyphen
non-renewable
resources
will help our upcoming generation.
On the other hand
, recycling is also
important to generate renewable resources
. For instance
, recycling steel and other metals will help to save mine
Change the pronoun
my
resources
. So it' is important to use less
Change the quantifier
fewer
resources
as well as to recycle the
things to save our world .
To sum up, In my Remove the article
apply
opinion
we should Add a comma
,opinion
we should
use Remove the redundancy
apply
less
Change the quantifier
fewer
resources
as many are non renewable
Add a hyphen
non-renewable
resources
but for protecting environment
we Add an article
the environment
also
should focus on re using
Correct your spelling
reusing
eco friendly
materials. Both recycling and less using of Add a hyphen
eco-friendly
resources
is an important part and everyone should be encouraged to do both with
an equal manner.Change preposition
in
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite