Governments should spend more money on education than on recreation and sport. Do you agree or disagree?

The focus of
state
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the state
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should be on
quality
education
rather than wasting funds on extra
carriculum
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curriculum
curricular
activities
. I totally agree with
this
, as in my opinion at the end what matters most, is the knowledge and qualification, a person is having. I will
further
discuss the facts that are the causes of my agreement with the above statement. Our country
need
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more
education
due to high
illlitracy
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illiteracy
rate. More and more people
now a days
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nowadays
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are unable to give
quality
education
to there children due to high expenses.
For example
, a survey conducted in Pakistan showed that the
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illiteracy
rate in Pakistan is more than 59% in total. Under
such
circumstances,
education
is of much priority than leisure
activities
. I would recommend that
government
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the government
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should introduce free
quality
education
and more
need based
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scolarships
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scholarships
for the student that urge for it. Sports and other extra
carriculum
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curriculum
curricular
activities
are good to keep fit and
healty
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healthy
but
lack
of it will not put
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drastic effects on humanity.
However
,
lack
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a lack
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of
education
can bring serious problems that can be a hurdle in the progress of a country.
For instance
, as the
corona virus
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coronavirus
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hits the globe, all sports
activities
stopped but it doesn't
effect
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the world. Whereas, people with no
education
or
unawerness
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unawareness
of technology run out of jobs.
Moreover
, The
govenment
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government
that was unable to spend on online
education
in time got really
crticised
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criticised
criticized
by its people, because the precious time of students was wasted
alot
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a lot
by not giving exams on time. In conclusion, The state should focus on
quality
education
, rather
tha
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than
on extra
carriculum
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curriculum
curricular
activities
. I totally agree with
this
statement as the
lack
of sports cannot have drastic effects but
lack
of
quality
education
can be a great hurdle in the progress of a country.
Therefore
, I would recommend that
governement
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government
should spend more funds on
quality
education
by introducing more and more scholarships and
also
by giving free
education
to deserving students.
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