Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In modern life, we have enough environmental problems on our planet. The one part of people believed that a better
way
for solving might be in the national range but others think this
issue more efficient to decide on a global scale. In this
essay I describe both points of view; however
, I guess global scale might be a more productive way
of tackling this
problem.
On the one hand, we have people who believed that this
problem like a climate-changing is better to solve in national range. This
statement might be efficient because the government have the opportunity to impact their industry
and reduce the level of pollution in the country or use renewable sources of energy. All these factors depend on the economical climate inside the country and a good example of it might be Netherland. In 2015 they start to reduce using atomic sources of energy as a result
32% of local endangered species start to increase population in the typical locz\ation for them.
On the other hand
, we have people who sure this
problem better to solve on a global scale because only if all countries
involved in this
process
we can change this
image with pollution on the earth. All kinds of spoil industry
and deforestations in undeveloped countries
depends on the global economic process
and need of corporations. Unfortunately, one country can’t have enough impact on all these factors that why the only union might be a good way
for solving this
issue. A good example of this
influence might be Worl Wide Fund of Nature after 2010 they made some measures in the metal industry
of developing countries
which reduce pollution this
industry
to 20% in the earth.
In conclusion, I want to say that only if we all who live on the earth might be involved in process
of saving nature, we will be reach this
goal faster and easier. Only the union of countries
can find a flexible way
to solving this
huge process
like global warming and deforestation.Submitted by mila.kniaz on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite