Some people believe that too many resources and attention are devoted to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Conservation of wildlife has been a debated topic for several years. Many people these days think that there are too many measures taken to protect wild

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and birds. But I completely disagree

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statement as I do not feel that there are enough steps taken for the same. In

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essay, I will explain the reasons for my disagreement. In the present world, there are many species that are

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the verge of extinction.

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, the number of polar bears has shown a drastic decrease in the past few years due to global warming leading to

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of ice at the poles impacting the lives of these

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. The

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are still not taking initiatives to curb the factors causing global warming which is a serious threat to the survival of these species.

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, industrialization is a major contributor to the destruction of forests. Deforestation affects the natural habitat of a number of flora and fauna eventually resulting in their extinction. The

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should invest more in conserving these endangered

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and birds by

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different methods. More and more forest should be protected as wildlife

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sanctuaries

or national reserves for wild

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.

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,

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should enforce laws to control the pollution from various industries which is the primary cause

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global warming.

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would help in preserving the natural habitats of the polar bears and penguins who live in the north and south poles. In conclusion,

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there are a few resources to protect wild

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and birds, in my opinion, these are not sufficient.

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control measures over industries and conserving large forests are a few steps that the

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can take into consideration.