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Today, most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger.Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion? To what extent do you support this development?

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The average age of getting married and becoming
parent
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 is higher than before, people now prefer to wait until the thirties for having a family. I believe that
this
 is a positive trend and
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 fully support
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 perspective, the reasons for which would be discussed in
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Firstly
,
this
 approach can financially prepare them for a better future. They can focus on their careers at an early age without any responsibility
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 the family, which can give them secure earning for later on and
also
 they can save money during these years. Financial well-being and stability
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 an important part of a happy marries life and can be pre-assured by working hard in the twenties.
However
, taking responsibility for
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 or child during the period of professional struggle can make them feel overburdened.
Secondly
,
this
 development has given more opportunities for females to grow professionally. In past, women usually used to compromise their jobs for taking care of families, as entering the job market after long leaves for maternity was not easy. But, now they can develop their career until thirties reserve
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 position in the company and easily get back to work.
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