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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both the opinion and give your own view.

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While many
people
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 believe that visiting a foreign country or migrating there for work are the primary reasons that encourage a person to learn the local
language
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 of that country, some
people
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also
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 think that there are other benefits to learning a new
language
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.In my opinion, learning an alien
language
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 not only adds to an individual's skills but it
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 contributes to expanding their horizon. Travel and earning in
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foreign land are certainly key trends that motivate
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 to adapt to their local
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.
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, immigration has become increasingly common especially in developing countries where
people
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 are in search of better work opportunities.
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, developed countries that are sparsely populated are welcoming
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 from foreign lands to support their economic growth.
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 has led to enthusiasm in
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 for learning new
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 in order to benefit from the ongoing trends. That said, there are several other reasons as to why an individual must show interest in speaking alien
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.
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, it expands a person's resume by adding a skill to it which may open the door for many opportunities at the workplace.
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, an employee is likely to be considered for leading international conferences and meetings if he can speak in multiple
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. Another evident advantage
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 gained by learning a new
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 is that it opens up a person's mind because he gets exposed to other cultures around the world.
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, it expands their horizon of thinking which can only be seen as beneficial for personal development and growth. In conclusion, on one hand, visiting another country for work or pleasure serve as key motivators for
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 to learn new
languages
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, other factors like expanding one's resume and overall horizon
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 push
people
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 to show interest in speaking
languages
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 that are not familiar to them.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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