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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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It is true that lots of countries have faced the problems that there are always some
students
 with poor
behaviours
 at
school
. I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for
this
, but
parents
 and
schools
 could take steps to tackle
this
 problem. There are several reasons why young people are unable to manage their own
behaviours
 at
school
.
Firstly
, the different family backgrounds may lead some
students
 with bad
behaviours
 due to the less communication,
such
 as single-parent family, or poor family.
For example
,
students
 living in single-parent families are more likely to have bad
behaviours
 because the only parent needs to be busy with work rather than getting along with children which leads to lack of communication.
Secondly
, spoiling children may
also
 lead to poor
behaviours
 that
parents
 are too tolerant to children, young people are used to getting whatever they want which causes them to become selfish as well as self-centred.
Finally
, I believe that
schools
 do not have enough educators to manage large classes because there are too many
students
 in the same class.
However
, there are various steps that
schools
 and
parents
 could take to address these problems. One step for the
school
 to take is that
schools
 should establish clear rules and disciplines to supervise and restrain all
students
. Another way is giving teachers the right to punish
students
 who are troublesome
such
 as keeping the disruptive
students
 away from the classroom.
Furthermore
,
parents
 must support the
school
 rules which means
schools
 need to work closely with
parents
 as well as contact them if it is possible.
Also
,
parents
 should take responsibility for children’s education. In conclusion, various measures can be taken to cope with the problems that are certain to young
students
 with bad conducts.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • parental guidance
  • discipline
  • moral guidance
  • social media
  • detrimental
  • bullying
  • peer pressure
  • overcrowded
  • disengagement
  • disruptive behavior
  • behavioral policies
  • code of conduct
  • parental involvement
  • social and emotional learning (SEL)
  • empathy
  • responsible decisions
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