Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while other think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays , teaching can be done in various ways because there is a lot of content which is available on the internet and due to

this

reason, some people believe that teaching

children

at home is one of the best

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for a

child

's development, meanwhile , others think that it is crucial for the

children

to go to

school

. In my opinion, it is good to teach

children

at home but in some

cases

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it is necessary for the

child

to be at

school

. The following essay will discuss both views and

also

will give a detail explanation of my opinion. In today's world , due to the availability of content on the internet, it is not important to send the

children

to schools, as well as , they get personal attention from their parents who are educated.

For example

, there are many free lectures which are available on different websites and due to

this

fact , they can refer to the concept in which they have a doubt.

Moreover

, if a

child

belongs to an educated family,

then

he will get personal help from them but if he goes to

school

, there are many

children

in one class and teacher will not be able to focus on each and every

child

.

On the other hand

, many people believe that

children

should go to because ,

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, studies , there are many things that have to be learned. To illustrate , if a

child

goes to

school

, the most important that he acquires is how to work in a team by participating in

school

activities

such

as sports.

Additionally

, they are able to make more friends in

school

and

also

gain knowledge about maintaining the friendship. To conclude , in my opinion , it is good to gain

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at home but in some scenarios

such

as teamwork ,friendship it is necessary to be at schools.