Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while other think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays , teaching can be done in various ways because there is a lot of content which is available on the internet and due to
this
reason, some people believe that teaching
children
at home is one of the best
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for a
child
's development, meanwhile , others think that it is crucial for the
children
to go to
school
. In my opinion, it is good to teach
children
at home but in some
cases
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it is necessary for the
child
to be at
school
. The following essay will discuss both views and
also
will give a detail explanation of my opinion. In today's world , due to the availability of content on the internet, it is not important to send the
children
to schools, as well as , they get personal attention from their parents who are educated.
For example
, there are many free lectures which are available on different websites and due to
this
fact , they can refer to the concept in which they have a doubt.
Moreover
, if a
child
belongs to an educated family,
then
he will get personal help from them but if he goes to
school
, there are many
children
in one class and teacher will not be able to focus on each and every
child
.
On the other hand
, many people believe that
children
should go to because ,
beside
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, studies , there are many things that have to be learned. To illustrate , if a
child
goes to
school
, the most important that he acquires is how to work in a team by participating in
school
activities
such
as sports.
Additionally
, they are able to make more friends in
school
and
also
gain knowledge about maintaining the friendship. To conclude , in my opinion , it is good to gain
education
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at home but in some scenarios
such
as teamwork ,friendship it is necessary to be at schools.
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