You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at school. Write a letter to one of your old teachers asking for a reference. In your letter: say what job you have applied for, explain why you want this job suggest what information the teacher should include ,Write at least 150 words.
Dear Professor Yamen,
I would like to express my gratitude for your potential assistance in my job application. Your reference letter will certainly help me get the chance to interview for my new job.
I was selected among the majority of my colleagues for a temporary assistant teacher position at Belfast Technology University.
This
job has many benefits for my future career and current situation as it has enabled me to escalate my performance for a permanent post.
I would like you to emphasise detailed references about my performance at the university, including my teaching experiences, peer review, and professionalism. You were my influencer, and I still remember your words that I would have a promising career. You not only supported me but also
gave me confidence. I hope you keep up by giving me this
reference.
I look forward to hearing from you. Please send it to me by email or confirm a date for me to meet you soon.
Yours sincerely
Monem MohamedSubmitted by holamonem79 on
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task achievement
The letter is clear and meets the requirements of the task, but some minor rephrasing would make it more polished.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a single clear idea to enhance readability further.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are correctly used and very polite.
coherence cohesion
The logical structure of the letter is well-organized and easy to follow.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is appropriate and respectful.