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For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree?

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Technology has come a long way, making
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skill
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 becoming another important
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 to learn of study along with math, reading and writing. I totally agree with
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 statement and I will explain why. It is undeniable that knowledge of
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 is paramount in
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 learning system these days. Due to the fact that all education system has been computerised. We no longer see kids carrying a book to
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, they all carry their laptops and Chromebooks as the only learning tools being used in the
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. most of the learning happens online and kids need to have the minimum knowledge on how to use a
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 to write essays, edit, draw pictures, use images and all other features. Without
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 understanding they would not be able to follow their classes. Students are not the only groups whose
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skill
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 is a must for them. When it comes to finding a job, having
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 knowledge is
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 essential. Almost all office jobs need a certain understanding of some basic
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 science.
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, one needs to know how to work with Microsoft Office if he wants to get a job working at the front desk dealing with any reservation and booking system. I can claim that in modern fast-paced society it is impossible to deal with office jobs without a
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. In my view, someone who does not have
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skill
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, it is literally called illiterate. The reason lies in the fact that almost everyone uses a
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 at home, at work, in
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 and everywhere.
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, the
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 is considered the fourth
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 after reading, writing and Math.
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