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Some people believe that technology has increased the social interaction while others are disagree, Discuss both and give your own opinion.

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A handful of individuals believe that digitalization has enhanced the community interaction while few folks are against
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 has made societal life more comfortable and connected in terms of conversation.
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 with, an increased level of social interaction is an outcome of modern technological devices like mobile phones and laptops,because in
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 modern era most the people are connected with each other globally with the help of a social application like Instagrams,Facebook and WhatsApp.
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, commons can communicate with their near and near one within seconds which was not possible earlier. At present digital machinery has made a way for more difficult processes like; in ,Covid pandemic populace maintained social interaction with the help of
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 ,
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 has emerged as a reliable source of contact for humankind.
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, some
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 have a contradictory belief that technology has boosted social bonding because technology has made link limited up to devices only, which has made man anti-social.
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, due to the impact of
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 digitization
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 have created their own fictional worlds which have effected real conversation among
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 technology gives birth to social distractions.
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; As per a survey conducted by the ministry of telecommunication that
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 communicate with their unknowns for long hours rather than a real conversation with their near and dear ones. To conclude, machinery has made human life more convenient which has aroused the boundaries along with some issues
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 has made transmission easier as it was in an earlier time.
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