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Some people believe that academic success depends mostly on having a good teacher other argue that it is the attitude of student discuss both view and give your own opinion?

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Few individual think that tertiary success is based on a good educator mostly some believe that it is all over to
scholars
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 behaviour in my opinion I believe that education success is totally really on a having an excellent educationalist because
students
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 get proper evaluation for their
work
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 in
study
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 as well as it provide moral ethics for their upcoming
life
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to begin
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 with everyone has a right to
study
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 and it helps
scholars
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 in every sphere of
life
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 with the advice of mentor scholar make their
study
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 easier because learner get proper guidance and evaluation for their
work
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 in every section
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 as per the survey of BBC news
students
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 train 80% good result in board examination under the Skills of educationalist alone with
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 learnr gain some moral ethics and motivation which is beneficial for their upcoming period of
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on the contrary
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 masses believe tertiary success is based on a student's behaviour because will power is very essential for development and create excellence in their studies additional e if
scholars
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 have great desire for their
work
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students
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 can easily get good result like in same class few scholar are not able to get passing marks
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 to
students
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 who get a grade A the both have told a same tutor In my opinion mentor has a great role in learner's
life
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 for tertiary sucess with proper guidance and evaluation to conclude educational services mandatory for
scholars
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 and mentor who provide proper direction for their
study
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 while student have to give constant efforts for
work
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pedagogy
  • educational attainment
  • student-centered learning
  • intrinsic motivation
  • learner autonomy
  • didactic methods
  • academic achievement
  • inspirational teaching
  • self-directed learning
  • educational trajectory
  • learning facilitation
  • motivational strategies
  • personalized instruction
  • engagement in learning
  • teacher-student rapport
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