Tourism is causing environmental problems all around the world. What are the main causes of this? What are some solutions?

It is a tendency to believe that tourism
are
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the major problems which lead to the deliberative in
environment
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the environment
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around the
world
. In
this
essay, I believe that in advance stage of globalization could make people travelling across the global easier.
This
reason can cause the
environment
in public
places
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into troubles. According to the recent
world
,
the
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transportation
are
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now developed into the advance stage of technologies by
produce
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the
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convenient trains or
aeropoanes
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aeroplanes
for people to travelling trough their destination in a
shorten
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time.
For example
, people
are now chose
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to travel across the continents rather than the past because there are
low cost
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flight available more in the present time.
This
reason
bring
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the travellers
explore
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more in the tourist
places
and thereby an
increasing
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in waste around the place. Most of the tourist destinations are natural
places
such
as ocean or mountain. It cannot
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the fact that the popular oceans and mountains around the
world
are full of plastic density which causes
harmful
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to the animals in the sea
also
wildlife in the forest. They are suffering
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this
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problems
over
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decades
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since the travelling was boosted.
However
, there are several solutions to fix
this
problem.
Firstly
, the tourists have to raise awareness of
environment
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issues because 90
percent
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of these problems are induced by
human
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.
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, tourist
need
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to reduce the use of waste especially plastics and kept it away from the
environment
. Do not throw it on the ground or the sea.
Moreover
, governments should restrict
on
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the rules of
tourism
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tourists
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travelling
in
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nowadays by force the tourists that cause the
destructive
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of environments for pension and should promote the legally of
environment
protection in every destination
places
around the
world
.
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recapitulate, the
environment
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issues that caused by tourism should be concerned ineffectively ways. I strongly believed that human should live with kindness to our planet including other animals and plants so we can sustain our planet to live longer in the future.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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