What are the benefits of living in big cities,as opposed to rural areas? What are the problems of rural areas, and how can they be solved?

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It irrefutable that,
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is the key to a healthy life for everyone. A certain segment of society believes that
people
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prefer to the big
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rather than rural
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.all
people
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need to basic requirements like medical system, public transportation
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, a job with higher salaries,electricity and I feel that there are more benefits of living big
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,with there are many benefits of living in big cities like medical is available with all
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which are required in case of emergency to save a person living the opposite side rural
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have very few medical
facilities
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and may not save a person's life in critical situations.
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result is more attraction of
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.
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for living
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the amount of taxes collected by the government has a higher rate than rulers
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. There before some big cities get more fund for
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for public transportation . Electricity school and college . They are rural area's have very few
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and lacks behind in
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because of uncompleted planning by
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authority.
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I feel that these problems can be resolved same
people
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in developing rural
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government should private organizations for funding to improve
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in rural life transport, education
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, medical
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not good which can help in improvement in
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like both
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. To conclude , I recommend special focus can the problem of area's by the government to resolve the problem of rural
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.
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are living in there
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and
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should suggestion
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for rural area's.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Amenities
  • Employment opportunities
  • Healthcare services
  • Educational institutions
  • Public transport
  • Social interactions
  • Quality of life
  • Specialized skills
  • Diverse industries
  • Medical care
  • Concentration
  • Infrastructure
  • Government investment
  • Internet connectivity
  • Local businesses
  • Community building
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