Young people these days tend to be less polite and respectful than in the past. what are the causes? Suggest some solutions?

Nowadays teenagers become more impolite and do not respect adults.
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problem is getting worse from day
to day
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. Some people argue about the reasons
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I will try to find the motives of it and give a decision about how can we stop it. From my point of view, one of the causes is that parents spend less
time
with their children presently. They are into their work and career, so infants must educate themselves without
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of relatives.
As a result
, teens grow up
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mental unhealthy, they argue a lot, they do not know how they need to behave in public. So, I believe, that the essential reason
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children who educated badly is their parents’ inattention. What can we do to slow
this
process of badly behaved youth amount growing up? Most importantly, mothers should give more care to their kids and spend much more
time
with them. If it is impossible,
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must visit some extra classes,
such
as dancing or drawing etc. Activities like
this
will take their
time
without parents and
furthermore
, it can develop their skills and interests.
Therefore
, teenagers must spend their
time
with pleasure and benefits for their future as well as they should spend less
time
with their phones, which are crucial for their
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. To sum up, society
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to pay more attention to the youngsters and their education. In my humble opinion, the problem of less polite and respectful kids can be solved quickly if we really want it to be.
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